From left: Soraida Garcia and Amanda Irvin examine returned equipment Wednesday afternoon in the photography department of Pima Community College West.
Nice job of finding people to photograph, and of collecting cutline info. Using "Garcia, left, and..." would be less intrusive. I found my eye drawn to the refrigerator. Consider cropping that out. The photo equipment behind them sets the scene well, and I'm not sure the right-side clutter adds to the story telling.
Is it me, or is Soraida a total hottie? Might need to get her number to "verify" this photo, lol!
ReplyDeleteNice job of finding people to photograph, and of collecting cutline info. Using "Garcia, left, and..." would be less intrusive. I found my eye drawn to the refrigerator. Consider cropping that out. The photo equipment behind them sets the scene well, and I'm not sure the right-side clutter adds to the story telling.
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