Is it me, or is Soraida a total hottie? Might need to get her number to "verify" this photo, lol!
Nice job of finding people to photograph, and of collecting cutline info. Using "Garcia, left, and..." would be less intrusive. I found my eye drawn to the refrigerator. Consider cropping that out. The photo equipment behind them sets the scene well, and I'm not sure the right-side clutter adds to the story telling.